I’ve really wanted to put more up here recently. The only thing I really have to show for the last week or so is a mess of pages marked up to hell. Like, seriously.
This is Mother of Mars, in its current state. All of those markups are changes I’ve made since I “released” it earlier this year– like Junish. I really want to get it done. Not just because I’m tired of it, but rather because I’m really into it.
Some parts have been tough. Today I literally replaced about 2/3 of a chapter with similar yet entirely new writing that that holds a great deal of significance to the plot, or rather the newly revised more coherent more engaging plot that will eventually lead into the sequel. Sigh.
There are a few notes I’ve left myself to make sure I go back and rewrite a few passages that still feel lazily written. Some of my notes include:
Make this better
I am out of my writing aid; the fancy wine I bought in France so I’m just kind of huffing it now. I know I promised more “Hell to Pay” this month, but this is consuming all of my time. At least I think the compilation of the old chapters is revised and edited and pretty much ready to go up.
I have a vlog going up tomorrowish, but I have to upload the video overnight because it’s long and the internet here is abysmal.